All Comments on 'A Change Of Luck Ch. 02'

That was a great story, I loved it you should do more.

it was good, however what happened between you and mary, i mean that was why you moved in first, you make only one menition of gina in the first story and it make it seem like mary is the one who you were going to hook up with, just wanna know what happened between you and her.

oh shit....i totaly screwed up on part one...i must have forgot to to though it once more. Mary is Gina, and Gina is Mary. The fact is that when i started writing the story her name was Mary, but before i finished it, I wrote another story revolving around a charachter called Mary, so i changed it into Gina to avoid confusion. Sorry for the mix up.-

I hope you still liked the story

Keep it up. You're improving!

very nice , story flowed nicely, all in u made me hot , keep UP THE GOOD WORK

HUGGS, STEVE

It's very good and pretty arousing but I didn't really like how Lena suddenly wasn't part of the story any more. To be honest I prefered her to Gina. Any way that's just my opinion. I still think it's good though. Keep it up.

I loved this story. I like very much she males. Some of them are beautiful.

bro you have ripped my dream apart from my brain and put it into words.

Loved your story. It appears sooooo real.

I loved the story thought they were both great plunty of great moments yes names change but I think over all was a great story if ever want help I be willing to over look any more great job well done

so this was fantastic though I gotta ask because im kina confused, Mary was the girl he was in love with and Lena was the girl in the bar and Gina's the roommate why not make it where Mary was the one with the cock? because the whole gina thing was kinda random and otherwise whats the point of the girl he was in love with? also what happened to Lena? that being said the emotion shown in the story was great and it had some hot sex scene's in it.

Is it Mary or Gina? I hate it when writers can't keep names straight. Sloppy