All Comments on 'A Christmas Carol Revisited'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Good beginning, I always liked A Christmas Carol. Although I wish you would have told what happened to Sarah that has him locked in the past.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great job! Just a thought- could make an interesting movie script, adult of course.

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I'm a strange combination of old-fashioned gentleman and utter perv. There are a lot of things I'm curious about, things I've never done in RL, things that I think I'd like, but can't be sure till I try them. I've written erotica off and on since microchips were made of flint....

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