All Comments on 'A Cleaning Adventure'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
loved it!

Loved the story, such wonderful detail, although I felt it ended rather abruptly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another Fantastic Episode

I have followed this story from start to finish, it is just brilliant, I have been gripped, wondering where the story will take me next,

In my opinion, I havent read better,

Keep it up :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
very vivd

i could feel let alone picture it in my head every detail had me looking for more. very good

DomwoolfDomwoolfalmost 12 years ago
A nice series

I enjoyed your series and believe it could become a very nice novel. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Bring in the language doctor

"You need to learn patients" ?!

leibeleibeabout 9 years ago

Loved this story x

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