by fntsymn
I love the story however the name of Edward changes servers times in this section to Arthur. The change between names is very distracting.
really enjoying this story we both liked it ,but chap 4 end "who is Arthur!"
What a great story! It made me very hard. I can't wait to read more. Bravo!
Was Arthur hiding away behind the couch? Or is that Edward's alter-ego that he slips into when going on cam? I quit reading as soon as fantsymn couldn't decide who the players were.
To Anonymous who says I plagirezed the story. Could you be king enough to give the name of the story you think I coppied.
Stealing someone else's story and changing the names does NOT make you an author. You should be ashamed of yourself.
I don't understand ignorant people, who after reading four chapters and knowing where the story is going, can post a negative comment lke that.
You read all of the chapters, right?
You knew where it was leading, right?
If you don't like what the story is telling you, turn it off and find another one, but don't throw out negative comments just because it didn't meet your "Standards".
I did enjoy all four chapters and am looking forward to more. Thank you.
Sorry but whan you furnish the woman, you are a cockold fool, thats not hot.