All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 32'

interesting. Not sure if I like it or not.

It must have been tough to come up with an ending for the series.

I loved the series. I was a little sad at the ending but could see it coming and it was in character. Overall, I really enjoyed the series. Good work. I look forward to more of your work. Thanks.

...that being said,

*cries*

I don't know if I liked it or not because of the ending and I thought she was a bit of a bitch for leaving him for his son. I thought that was a bit horrible but otherwise the story was well written.

Loved it other than the ending. Although it's a difficult story to bring to a satisfactory conclusion, the ending seemed rushed, and not in keeping with the character development of the rest of the story. I would have liked to see a slower wind up over more chapters.

...looking forward to any future submissions though!

I was enthralled and I know what everyone else was feeling. I was in love with Amy and didn't want her to leave, but I knew she would. I am also a parent and relate to the feelings expressed by the author. I am not surprised by the way you ended it. It is entirely logical and I think it was the right way to end it, if such a wonderful story had to end. Thanks for writing it.

I give the whole story a 10, almost. The only thing missing was you didn't give us time to get to know Mike and his character and have Amy slowly discover her falling in love with him, a couple more chapters with Mike in them and you could have ended it more brilliantly. As it stands now, Mike is the consummate bad guy stealing another man's girl, breaking a man's heart and SPIRIT!

This is definately the best story ive read on this website. Mainly due to the fact it is actually a 'story' that has twists and turns and really connects you with the characters. Other submissions on this website are nothing but a few badly written descriptions of the writers predictable fantasies, but this is an enthralling, unpredictable, and original story! It is a shame it had to end, but it was ended well. However i do feel the ending was slightly abrupt and i didnt particlarly like the introduction of mike or the fact that amy ends up with him. But where's the fun in a perfect happy ending?

I had been thinking that I would encourage you to write more stories, but I won't. This one is very well written, I couldn't stop reading it. It is also by far, the most painful thing I've ever read! I'm not annoyed or anything like that. My life is so full of pain already that I don't need to go 'round looking for more.<P>

Its not just Amy's abandoning him, she and his son stabbed him in the back and heart at the same time. These are wounds that will keep on bleeding. Sam can't see or even think about his grandson with out experiencing it all over again. Even thinking about his daughter is likely to scrape yet again the wound in his life. His only realistic hope of improving his life or regaining some measure of happiness is to open himself up to more pain and it doesn't sound like he will do that anytime soon.<P>

Even knowing that this story probably came out of your imagination doesn't make it any less painful because Art imitates life.<P>

<I>-- srgeek --</I>

I've been reading this since your first chapter..although the ending is a little bitter sweet and different because I'd expect her to fall in love with Sam from the beginning of the story, but its a really good ending. Sad to see that Sam ends up alone though after so long with Amy to see her falling in love with his son. Which is good too..but..I dont know how to describe it..but it just tugs at my heart and a tear rolled down my cheeks to see Sam alone. I love your writtings....

very very good story as a whole however that ending was really sad

not just a bit sad

but I mean he already lost his first wife and despite this he rebuilt his life

then he lost her and he lost her to the worst possible person, his own son

I saw sorrow coming from a mile away though (probably your intention) and the ending was even worse than I imagined

ho and to add the chery on top, the closing comment about not finding his new model a home.

honestly I don't know how I could recover from that if it were to happen to me

That said, it was a great story, still all the sexuality contained within is a bit dumbed down by all that sorrow.

I can see why she came to love the son over the father though.

I have a very difficult time to click that 5 star button even though I wouldn't want to rate it anything else.

I still wish the ending wasn't so bad and the sex side was pushed a bit more over other chapters.

ho and wanted to add

how can you do that to you own father ?

If I was his son, honestly even if she left my father I don't know how I could deal with stealing my father's love. I know I would have a super hard time to look him in the eye after that. Even if she probably would not go back to being with my father

Oh,..I have been enjoying and laughing so much,while reading this story,this is really one of my absolute favorites!! I thank you (Providal) very much.. Hope I can find more of your works..algar1939

This piece.of work...knowledgeable, deliciously erotic, and a luscious experience for any reader. But for a lierary one, beyond that! Just so you know!! Thank you for sharing!

31 great chapters, wonderful build up, two brilliant characters - then one of the most disapointing endings of all time.

You could do worse, even after all this time, of writing chapter 33 with a different ending that keeps the two of them together.

A real let down, I feel quite cheated somehow by the ending, very much an anti-climax - pun intended !

there is a lot of work gone into all 32 chapters of this and it kept my attention the whole way, until the end...

So disappointing!

I am trying to figure out why? I suppose I think that if Amy was going to go that way she would have been flirting etc for weeks before hand and making it painfully obvious what she was thinking.

However for our Artist this should not be the surrender to the inevitable... he is obviously not finished with life and relationships - what about Greta? Lots of possible options there to be explored...

I did enjoy the story to the last chapter - well done and don't stop writing

The ending shocked me...I didnt know how it would end but, this just made me sooo sad.

This was a great story until the ending

Write an alternative more acceptable ending for Sam's sake.

This one is just dreadful.

Rapier

That was unexpected.

I enjoyed the story very much, including the humour and how the short chapters kept things moving. Any end would be disappointing but this was espically so. Amy moving on at some point was always a possibility but who with was a surprise and with little indication of any connection between her and Mike.

Thank you.