All Comments on 'A Date at the Sheraton'

Sounds like a truly loving wife to me. How amazing.

Could be good, should be in Romance if they are married or a couple.

So much of what I write has a sad undercurrent, sometimes I just write a "scene" if you will...

....having to pay to have sex. (Hotel, sitter, etc.)

A woman who is eager to spend the night with her husband and seduce him into hot sex. WOW!!! And a husband who appreciates the wife he has. WOW!! I know if all the stories were like this we would probably get tired of them but sometimes I wonder if all we can see are the screwed up relationships, kind of like all the news seems to focus on the problems of the world. This was a refreshing change of pace.

Romance!!!

(No rating)

Wife plans date with husband, dresses sexily for him and then has room for them. Now thats sweet. And no one else involved. Thank you for that.

too many word mistakes. Goes to show not all the stories in this section has to be about cheating. 4 *'s

This story is refreshing as it starts out that their relationship is ambiguous then the reader slowly is led to understand they are a married couple who love each other and their sex life - mutally adoring and respecting each other and still still really hot for each other.

Happy ending.

Refreshing!

"A slow soft orgasm can hit hard. It left her exhausted and peaceful and ready to fall to sleep in his arms."

But immediately:

"A good fucking just made her want more. Panting and sweaty his pace had slowed but he made up for it. Each long stroke..."

Author needs to have made up his or her mind.

cuck shit.

Ez a történet egy nagy semmi ,vagyis nulla.....!!!!

I'VE READ WAY TOO MANY OF THESE STORIES! THE RESULT WAS THAT EVEN THOUGH I GOT THE HINTS THAT THEY WERE MARRIED I HAD TO SKIP AHEAD BECAUSE I WAS SURE SOMETHING BAD WAS GONNA HAPPEN.

Loved it. Agree totally with SamWarrens comment below. This story shows how it's possible to be get totally turned on with your lover, who happens to be your husband. A treasure. So sick of the stories that think to be hot and erotic has to involve cheating and cucking. Keep it up. By the way, I l iked how she had a long slow love making night planned, but she was so turned on with her husband that she went with this way and really enjoyed herself. Plans are made to be broken sometimes when a better way presents itself spontaneously.

I don't think 'wife fucks husband' is a story.

Refreshing, a husband and wife in an erotic story and no cheating, no cuckolding. 4/5

Robinhod, when done right, like this one, it makes one hell of a story. If you've never done it with your beloved, you won't understand.

Just never jelled. 3 stars.

Bill S.

My wife and i had that night at a Sheraton years ago. Had to finish and go home to the kids but it was a great night out. I don't understand the readers who can't let their imaginations fill in the blanks. For me it jelled because i have lived it. If you can't follow it try video.