by MINKX
My my this little tale IS exciting. The best part? MY name is Katt and if this happened to me? Well that'd be dashing wouldn't it.
You wrote the whole non consent out so very well. Then with the last two sentences you brought it all together perfectly.
well done.
Mike C.
Loved the feistiness of your heroine, great little story, amusing and hot. Hard combo to pull off. Don't let the spelling nazis get you down, this was well presented.
I liked this in spite of the need for a spell checker. This story shows some imagination and writing talent. Keep at it.