All Comments on 'A First For Miya'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent story

Very hot, I especially liked the way you wrote intelligently and took some time to explain your characters. Being perfectly honest, I have kind of a thing for Asian stories, and yours was miles ahead of some of the stereotypical/poorly written ones that have been popping up lately. Only thing I would ask for in a sequel...sex with the female costar. Well done!

DarknessreignsbeautyDarknessreignsbeautyover 14 years ago
Finally!!!

I loved it, intelligent writing and a look into your lead's mind! So rare to see that on here your going on my fave list! Keep up the good writing!

XoxDarkXox

*kissies*

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