All Comments on 'A Forbidden Love Story...'

by MrsDanno

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Whats erotic here, she is braindead cunt thinking

with her cunt. She needs a divorce or both her and her "lover" need to die in an accidental gas explosion in her house.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Stupid b......

She is stupid whore and slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
...........?

............?????????

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well

Personally I can't think of a reason to stay married, but I'm sure you will come up with one. didn't find this erotic, sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
why not divorce then

shit why stay married if you want something else so much? didn't think much of this story, not the premise or the writting, sorry.

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 14 years ago
Problems with this one . . .

This story did not explain why the "heroine" felt the need to pursue love with someone else. There was no real story, no character development. What about her husband? He was boring, he just didn't do it for her? Her actions have jeopardized two marriages; her selfishness ends up hurting not only herself, she hurts at least three others (assuming there are no kids involved). Does the author suggest that women should feel free to pursue sex and physical love (like the stereotypical cheating male) whenever it offers itself? Well, it's not right for the gander and it's not right for the goose either. Maybe a longer story or additional chapters would help, but this one is incomplete as it stands.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
No story, No score!

No story here...just the mindless musings of a slovenly slut. The question of why such writers revel in stories of the continual contempt of a woman for her husband remains unanswered. Why not divorce, or is the woman a literal whore who wants to have security without commitment?<p>

But then, the experience of ages tells us that almost all women are like that.

Ducky7Ducky7over 14 years ago
What happened

I thought this was a story where did it go?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
New Writer!!!!!!!!!!

Good luck!!!!! With your next one.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THIS IS NOT TABOO

ITS DOWNRIGHT STUPID, DANGEROUS AND DECEITFUL, TK U MLJ LV NV

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 11 years ago
Well

As far as I can see a cheating slut tale written by a cheating slut. Oh, excuse me for getting personal.

cunt

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
What

What about your husband, and the bastards wife? You two are cheating pieces of shit. fuck you both.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
This

Reminds me of a woman that I have known for 9 years and I know it would be just like this when we finally meet for the first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well she was just another selfish and vile human being

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