All Comments on 'A Full Moon Phase Ch. 02'

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MzNell over 12 years ago

NEXT CHAPTER

Keep it coming, I can't wait for the next chapter, I have a feeling it's going to be interesting.

MizT over 12 years ago

Glad to be catching up because I don't have to wait for chapter 3. It's already here and I'm headed there right now!

Passion_Pen over 10 years ago

You sure know how to write an ending!

For the second time, I am hooked. There was a long block of someone's monologue where it was hard to read. You can break up dialogue into paragraphs too.

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Things you might want to know about my submissions: First, I think I should have spelled my user name maxIcue to clarify its meaning, Max-IQ, though the phallic I in the former brings out the double meaning in the name (i.e long cue stick) I meant the IQ thing to be ironic b...

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