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MizTMizTover 12 years ago
End?

Is this the end? They have concurred the enemy, been blesses by the Gods to have multiple mates for the purpose of keeping their lines alive. But only this one time, everyone will be monogamous from then on. And everyone is now happily mated. It sure feels like it but never actually says so?

I found the last of your story easier to read. I found it alittle confusing at first but am glad I stayed until now. If this is the end it was worth the journey!

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Things you might want to know about my submissions: First, I think I should have spelled my user name maxIcue to clarify its meaning, Max-IQ, though the phallic I in the former brings out the double meaning in the name (i.e long cue stick) I meant the IQ thing to be ironic b...

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