All Comments on 'A Gentle Whisper Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 14 years ago

Great teaser

Love the start. Waiting for chapter 2

EspressoBolus almost 14 years ago

Too short, but

I do like your attitude regarding criticism; "If you can't say something nice....I hope you enjoy!" Most readers will be OK with this lifestyle. If it were the wife doing the discipline, however!

Pistolpackinpete almost 14 years ago

Good prelude but not enough....

to have posted.

occasus514 almost 14 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you everone for the feedback...as for EspressoBolus....I love the stories as well, where the men are disciplined by their wives...however, as a submissive female, my turn on comes from a strong man delivering a sound spanking to deserving woman. :) However, maybe it's something I can look into for a future story. Thanks again everyone!

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Great intro

This is a great intro... makes me want to read ch. 2... just what DID she do? great writing by the way.

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