All Comments on 'A Gift Amongst Friends Ch. 04'

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PaperdartPaperdartover 10 years ago
Good

Good to see that this story is continuing. I want to see what happens as a result of Mandy's photos on her camera.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I like the plot involving the camera and subsequently others seeing the photos. For me, the sudden jump to blatant exhibition/ fucking was difficult to justify given her nervousness at handing the camera over.

skyicewolfskyicewolfover 10 years ago
Love it

Been a huge fan, read stories lots of times. Please continue! ^.^

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting

Great character development. Interesting to read about the upcoming toga party. Still very curious about whether or not David and Alex will have more interactions with Mandy.

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Updated Jan 2023: A new story is up! It’s a bit of a departure from some of my more recent submissions. As always, your feedback is greatly appreciated. For new readers, my stories are heavily themed around exhibitionism and submission. Some stories also include themes of h...