by Hcstuds
U OBVIOUSLY OUTDID URSELF WITH THIS CHAPTER. AGAIN GREAT. WELL DONE.
fantastic . could go on and on . perhaps U could develop the next issue with resulting pregnancies. I know the feeling of being full with a loving mans baby. is out of this world other than the slight discomfort at delivery time
all success to your future efforts
regards Jem.
There needs to be some impregnating going on here. Perhaps Sam can get pregnant and make Sherry a grandma? Maybe the 3 of them living together, naked all the time and fucking "at will", without regard to ovulating times. Perhaps Sherry can become a new Mommy, too, if she is not too old....If pregnancies are involved this could easily be a "1000" (yes one-thousand) story.
Needs some editing...e.g. SCOTCH whiskey, not Scots. Interesting premise, though.
Really enjoyed this story and the way it developed and the relationships built up until they all joined together - very tender and loving. well done.
I jumped in your shit because of the ending to chapt. 1, before I discovered that it wasn't the end. That was a mistake, and I want to apologize for it. I think this is an excellent series, though I'm not sure if it needs to continue. However, that's your decision, and if you write more, I'll probably read it. But please, leave out the anal action, or at least warn that it's there. That won't hurt anyone, and will let those of us who don't like it to know not to read it.