by Ladytiger199
You have a gift for storytelling, but you would benefit from the services of an equally gifted proofreader.....
Plez finish this story. Don't be like some writers that leave us hanging and never end it. I am hooked!!
Don't you just hate bad feedback.. I don't refer to positive advice, just the crap where sombody is spiteful just for the sake of it? I mean; what the hell was the point of that last piece of feedback, "I'm not reading anything else by you because it ends on a cliff hanger". Good- fuck off then. I used to get that a lot on here, especially the subject that I was writing. I really enjoyed your story, please keep going.
Seriously I would of never started reading the story if I'd known it would of ended with it hanging like chapter 5. I most def won't be reading any other of your stories just for that reason.
I have been awaiting the new chapters eagerly and have enjoyed them immensly.. you weave a wonderful tale full of twists,intrigue, and passion I look forwards to the next installment to see what the lady will do to become princess or will tecor be up to the task to keep esric