All Comments on 'A Heiress, Tax Evasion, & Prison Ch. 04'
by Menderman
- 8 Comments
Catytheghostover 16 years agohmm was this about Paris Hilton orPetra Hollis you got totaly sloppy in you name changes.Good story other than for the name errors.
Anonymousover 16 years agoHmmmm, i noticed the slip in names as well catytheghost, one second she's petra and the next she's paris
Anonymousover 15 years agoA good read but the author did not know how to finish it and left the story hanging, needs a final conclusion
Anonymousover 14 years agoYes, I agree - a poor ending, and the constant switching of names was very annoying. We all know who 'Petra' was supposed to be so there was no need to keep screwing around with the names.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agolove the story hope you carry it on would love to know the out come
Elmer100about 7 years agoThe end is anti-climax but it's still poetic. I would hope the real Hollis got it good when she was inside.
ptebadenover 6 years agoThis story had a very good begining, after that, turned some hard and its final is ... no final.
