All Comments on 'A Hotwife Explores the Dark Side'
by tustin92614
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 10 years agoT,
The sex stuff was better than average for sure, but there was almost no conflict in the story, in fact, there wasn't any. Three stars.
Matt Moreau
tustin92614about 10 years agoAuthorWell, I am the first to admit this is no masterpiece!! And you are right, there is no real meaningful plot and no conflict among the 3 players. But, I did that intentionally, as I wanted to emphasize the normalcy the players see in their lifestyle. As I wrote and re-wrote the dialog, I kept trying to make it flow like they were just talking about last night's baseball game. No big deal. I appreciate your comments!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoTHE WAY YOU WORTE THE STORY THER WAS NO BULL SHIT TALK NO PUTTING DOWN THE HUSBAN OR THE WIFE BECAUSE SHE LIKES BIG COCK OR BLACK COCK MADE THE READABLE THANK YOU .
Anonymousover 6 years agoVERY GOOD NO CONFLICT THE WAY IT SHOULD BE NO PUTING DOWN THE HUSBAN AND NO PTING DOWN THE WIFE JUST PLAIN FUCKEN THE REST OF THOSE ASS HOLES THAT THE OTHER STUF SUCK
Anonymousover 5 years agoSo all of your cat shit gets rated One (1) star.
(Cat shit, unlike horse shit or bull shit is absolutely useless. Horse or bull shit can be used as fertilizer, and cow shit can at least be used as a low-grade fuel. )
But cat shit is not only useless, it poses an absolute threat to pregnant women and human infants!
Which is what your crap is! Everything gets 1 star, jerk!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoGreat story! The hater's that post negatives have not written a word. Please continue to write.
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