All Comments on 'A Kitchen Fit to Party in Ch. 02'

Outstanding story line, good characters, and very will written. You have certainly captured your readers waiting with baited breath and very wet.This story hits very close to home. I know how she feels. Tom is doing everything right. Keep the good work.

Love the seduction and expanding her horizon aspect of the story. Definitely watching for next chapters.

The concerns I had at the end of Chapter 1 have been somewhat put to rest. Tom is doing an outstanding job of gently coaxing his subject. Nice.

The story line and characters are good. My complaint is to do with the flow, or readability of the story. May I suggest that you try writing as you speak - i.e. not cannot, but can't, or will not (won't) etc.

I have read Chapters 1 & 2 you have my attention.