All Comments on 'A Lesson For Life'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
One hot story!

This sure is one hot story, it does however need some more attention paid to spelling. Also it took a while to get going but on the whole it's pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Bad Editing

Did you have anyone proofread your story before you submitted it? There are way to many grammatical mistakes in your story, both spelling and syntax. Next time use a spell check program and find someone to proofread it before you submit a story.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago

It's great that the wrong-doings were addressed and the main character (Kimberly) received words of encouragement and advise from her mom and her professor to help with self-esteem and confidence. Great! The sex scenes were ok but what raised an eyebrow for me was a dildo after anal sex was shoved into another woman's vagina without cleaning and after she cums they both lick the remnants off. Hummm, that seems a bit unsanitary to Me. But hey, different strokes for different folks.

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