by stepjones
Good mini-story. But awfully rushed, from meeting to happily ever after in 5 pages?
Wonderful romantic love story. Your story is fun, sexy, sensual. I thoroughly enjoyed your story.
You are a great story teller.
Hopefully, you find the time to tell us another story.
xoxo,
tedi
GREAT STORY, FUN TO READ. THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN ALL THAT CRAP ABOUT MEN BEING WIMPS, THEIR WIVES CHEATING, AND THE HUSBAND BLAMING HIMSELF SOMEHOW. OR, MOM AND SON, CHEATING BEHIND DADS BACK, ALL CRAP. THIS IS JUST FUN SEXY, NOBODY GETS HURT NO CHEATING, YES, THIS IS THE STORIES THAT I WANT TO READ, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, AND, NO, I'M NOT GAY, I'M ALL MALE, JUST A MAN THAT DOES NOT WANT TO READ ABOUT A BUNCH OF BS.
Full of desire, want, love, hurt, and lastly, love. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Boy that is a great story. I was feeling great about it all the way Through. Write some more stories like that one!!!!!!!!
Thank you Lcnmd for your comment that led me to this wonderful story. Literotica family, this is a good read - I highly recommend it. Life has a way of awakening upon itself, just like the characters in the story. Enjoy
My favorite stories always include School teachers! THANXXX for your composition - it ws HOTTT!
You nailed the emotional content right on the head! The confusion, desire, and acceptance. Proper use of descriptive language with a good vocabulary really makes it a pleasure to read. Thank you!
You have a great talent, drawing in the reader to the emotions that both women felt and the conflicts within both of them. A brilliant piece of writing. Thank You for sharing your talent with us.
Very nice ! moves easily, sex is great, tender, loving. Scenario is realistic ! Looking for more from this author !
what a great story, for a second i thought it was going t be a sad endin and i was devastated :) luckily that wasnt the case. was a privilege to read :D x
What an outstanding story, I think it's one of the best I've ever read here. You have described the sex and the relationship in a beautiful way. Keep up the great work.
What a wonderful story! You captured the emotions so well. The sex was erotic and lusty. Looking forward to reading part 2. Thank you for doing such a wonderful job!
Your long awaited new story was surely worth the wait. It is white hot, sensuous and fills me with burning lust every time I read it.
The description of Kayla's smoothly shaven mound and Missy's wet beckoning pussy are just fantastic. The sexual tension, as they lust and burn for each other is classic stepjones. The descriptions of their arousal building to climax is extraordinary!
Bravo for another magnificent story and taking the time to share it with us.
I have read all of your stories several times over. They are all great. I wish that you would write more often. Please continue to write these stories.
Step, I have been away from Literotica for a while and I was delighted to see a new story from you. I have enjoyed all of your stories and can only hope you keep writing them.
This is a beautifully written, sensual, story! Excellent work - please keep writing, you're a gifted writer of erotic material.
I have read all of your stories and have loved them all. I hope to read many more in the future.
on my rating submission scale has burst !!! Please continue.