All Comments on 'A Little Instruction'

I'm taking my Literotica break at work - this was a wonderful break except I'm having a hard time getting back to work.

Just letting you know that this is my first submission and welcome feedback from one and all, good or bad.

I have noticed a couple of editing errors that I unfortunately missed prior to submission. I edited the original to change the names and make it my girlfriend instead of my wife, in the process I left the word husband in there and also in the title description used the word wife instead of girlfriend.

Hey loser,

Couldn't you have finished off this story all in one part instead of wasting time with that short 2nd part? What a piece of garbage.

the beginning with the names identifying the couple's conversation was distracting but wow when you finally hit your stride you hit it well.. A great story... room for another maybe the girls doing each ... well done....