by mntnman64
A great idea and story.. Resonates with some of my own relationship questions. Looking forward to the next chapters and his other stories. Thank you.
He introduced the idea and gave her time. It works wherever you go from here will be a good progress
I did like your story, BUT I still have the words of a BDSMer floating before my eyes, that is something along the lines of "clueless amateurs getting hold of BDSM equipment has his 'red flag' for danger flying high". I have to give myself a 'mental slap' to remind myself its just a story.
Thank you for this very well written story. You have pulled me into this couples naughty little secret life. I'm already trying to imagine just how far this little sub will be taken (literally).
just lovely, please do not keep us waiting to long for #2
Thank you
You spent a lot of time with the backstory yet still managed to keep your reader hooked - a very useful move if you can manage it - and you did, so very well.
I am looking forward very much to the final chapter - well done and full marks.
This I feel is a very good adult content "morsel". You didn't just jump in with the actual BDSM and had quite an intricate backstory, also I very much enjoyed the BDSM scene! Altogether keep up this way of writing adult content, I really was left feeling like Carla: wanting more! :)