by rexfelis
would have been better if they fell in love .........I love romance in a story
Stephen J 2
As the first commenter says, there is very little sexuality in this story. I liked it, I read the whole thing through. The climatic part, however, was not so climatic; there needs to be more than "it was very sexy and orgasmic". I realize you gave more detail, but the why and how the sex was so intense needs to be described further than that it was sooo intense.
This is a very good story but it doesnt really describe much of the sexuality. come on if you gonna post steal our attentions.
The only flaw is that there hasn't been a sequel yet, few things are quite as stirring as a a willing, breeding succubus.
The only flaw with this story is that there hasn't been a sequel yet; few things are as stirring as the supernatural seduction of a willing succubus.
visuals in a spell-binding story. I truely enjoyed every word. Hope you create a part 2
very well written, and for once someone gets what a succubus is right! extremely erotic, so please do write that second chapter.
Based on some of the feedbacks I have received, I would like to say two things:
1. The above story is a work of fiction, in case you may be wondering. It has not really happened. I wrote it hoping to make it sound so realistic that it could have happened, but I never thought anyone would consider it anything more than a work of fiction. It is fiction, my friends.
2. No, I will not tell you how to summon, conjure, or even draw the attention of a succubus, incubus, or any other sort of creature, infernal or otherwise. It is my sincere opinion that anyone so stupid as to attempt to conjure a demon deserves what they will undoubtedly get, but I will not help you do it, thanks.
That said, I do appreciate getting feedback, and I am considering a second chapter to illustrate what a succubus or incubus would be more likely to really do to someone who was utterly stupid enough to try to call them.