All Comments on 'A Maggot in My Mind Ch. 05'

Have now read the whole story (to date)..cant wait for the next installment!

This is one of the best story tellers i have found so far in this site.

Love the build up..and descriptive scenes..

Thank you

J

This is a brilliant bit of writing. The best I've ever read on Literotica !!!

Story begins with insight about conflicting desires. Very good start.

The sexual draw to Rick seemed quite plauseable. Sara starts to unravel.

Sara's thoughts and actions sound as if she may be sliding into psychosis.

As a psychiatrist, I've seen that happen first hand: poor woman.

The writing is well done, above average, especially the lead in paragraphs

commenting on the foundation of the story.

Then what the hell happened?? Now we have Maria and Juan, a new plot

and it feels like a different author. The original plot goes to God knows where,

and there is no more developement of Sara's character nor of Tom's.

The entire Maria/Juan mess destroys what could have been a very interesting

and above average tale. Too bad.

I wish you would continue this story. I’ve read it before and returned to revisit again, it’s well scripted and written. The level of submission and the depths of humiliation is intriguing.