All Comments on 'A Man with No Arms'

It rambles in places and some of the comments directly to the reader felt strange, but overall I liked it a lot. You could write a sequel and tell us how the relationship changes over time.

Here goes one marriage down the drain, good writing, we will see where it goes.

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I agree that at times it does ramble but generally it was a good first effort. Not many typos or other obvious errors and a decent story line. Lee and Magichands would be proud.

I liked the style and the simplicity of it. It held my interest and was quite touching.

If wife wants affair with this guy bad enough to give husband to another woman, why the fuck stay married. A Little kinky is not haveing a open marriage. She says she loves her flawed husband, how luckey for him.

I really enjoyed this story. It was straight- forward, simple, but heartwarming story of a sympathetic loving doctor and a gutsy courageous veteran who refused to feel sorry for himself. Nice job.

60 year old George

First, one anonymous commenter mentioned that she liked him well enough to find her husband a girlfriend...Where was that? I missed it somehow. She was thinking of finding a woman friend for David. David is not her husband, her husband is Tom. David is the disabled man she was helping. Enough about that. The story was captivating and enjoyable to the end - it left me wanting more. I hope there will be more in a follow-up to this story!

you are damn fine writer. And dont let anyone ever tell you otherwise.

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Very original and CONSISTENT story. I dont think I can find the words... TOM isnt a total ass and the wife display the great trairs of a good and decent womn.

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a BIG BIG fan.... Harryin VA

Here is a 'to the point,' nice little story. It hints a bit but at least our heroine has morals, discusses the problem with her husband, and then she helps out the wounded soldier. There is honesty, and thank God, no emphasis on male humiliation, forced gay or other stuff that seems to permeate the 'Loving Wives' genre these days. The writing was good -- the author obviously is educated and proof-reads her work. Definitely one of the better stories in my opinion -- please keep writing. A sequel would also be nice.

I / We are very impressed by your direct conversational story telling and introspectional side visions shown to us and us alone - or so it seems.<P>

If there was advice to render, it should be not to change anything, but thats really not avoidable - is it. So, polish your confidence and skills but try to keep your respectful expressed outlook of life and yourself as you now see and word picture it. <P>

That makes you unique, very entertaining and strongly appreciated.<P>

With High Regard

A very nice ahhm...touch.

I enjoyed this story for too many reasons to list. Erotic, touching and realistic. You did lose marks for making the husband too willing to share his wife. There is a difference between understanding what she is doing and wanting it to happen. Still, the wife didn't lose control at her first sight of Dave's cock, as so many stories have. I look forward to the next chapter.

I enjoyed this story for too many reasons to list. Erotic, touching and realistic. You did lose marks for making the husband too willing to share his wife. There is a difference between understanding what she is doing and wanting it to happen. Still, the wife didn't lose control at her first sight of Dave's cock, as so many stories have. I look forward to the next chapter.

This is an unusual story, which is a very good thing in this category. This story kind of breaks the mold for the cheating wife, wimp husband stories so often found in this category these days. It was a very moving and erotic tale and I can imagine some husbands (not all) not being overly upset with their wife jacking off someone under these circumstances, so it was sort of realistic overall which leads to a very good story.

Once again, you are among the best of the best, at least in my opinion. I love your kindspiritedness, your staying faithful to Tom - even though I honestly still have misgivings about him, probably always will. On the other hand, David is a man who really deserves the loving care you give to him. He is lucky to have you!

I don't normally like this type of story but it is well done.

I really enjoyed reading it very entertaining without all the drama. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot!!!

Good story, but she crossed too many boundaries of ethical medical care. Without a nursing license, she couldn't work in home health care, even as a physician. Violates licensing regulations for both fields , as does prostitution. I know, it's just a fantasy.

I really liked this story. A situation like this could happen. I'd like to think that it is a true story.

A second part would be something to look forward too.

5*****

There is already a 2nd part. I hope it is as good as part 1.

She is a physician who engaged in a sex act with a patient under her care. That is a serious felony in about half of the states in the US and some prison time is pretty much unavoidable upon conviction. Sex with a patent is recognized as a major civil tort throughout the US and medical malpractice policies now exclude coverage for such acts. The slut doctor's hung patient could easily become the new owner of a large ranch property.

Well written,but still a violation of professional and personal standards.

Good story. It is the authors story and only the authors story. Anything can happen in the story that the author wants to happen or not happen. Why do these commenters insist on correcting the authors with their own details?

Do they not realize that they are reading FICTION?? Or are they simply 'controlling assholes'?. LP

Seems to me that there are a lot of people out there happy to send our young men to war, intentionally or not they return home chewed up and spat out by the machine and you are fucking worried about a fictional story? Take a good hard look at your morals and if you want to judge, judge each case on its merits not some mumbo jumbo crap written in 1 AD