All Comments on 'A Memorable Night'

nice memory

And things went downhill from there. UGH!

Why waste money on a hotel? Two old married farts can shag anytime at home, then fart and roll over and go to sleep. Yawn.....

Thanks for your feedback on my submission.

Why a hotel? Why not shag everywhere you can? ;)

Good start, go on!

Great to see a real Loving Wife and not a cheating slut for a change! Outstanding work, and keep it up!

5 Stars.

Thanks for your encouragement on my 2nd submission. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what's good and what's bad.

I have many ideas for stories and I am learning a lot about writing this format. It's a bit strange sharing such intimate stories from my own bedroom or hotel room

Agree this should be in erotic couplings.

Good story. The wife sounds really sexy.

My only real complaint is how naive the narrator sounds. Not everyone is a porn star or master lover, but the narrator sounds a bit naive and unskilled. He seems to have trouble getting it up (30 seconds of making out necessary, having trouble getting hard hours after one orgasm, etc.), and sex toys and masturbation are standard fare for most married couples, so the narrator's reaction feels a bit silly.

And if she is dry, that is what Astroglide was invented for. He doesn't have to "use" her. He just has to give her what she needs.

But good story. Keep writing.

Love any of the really good.loving wife stories that don't need cheating to be good.

Loved your story it sounds just like my wife and my friend when they went to bed and fucked all night.They loved getting together at least twice a week for sucking and fucking. I used to sleep in the spare bedroom.

You need to get a proof reader, there too many errors and missing words. I couldn't be bothered to continue reading.