All Comments on 'A Mistress and Her Slave Ch. 05'

Well, that is what a writer does...and you do it well!

I look forward to the rest of it.

This is a wonderful story - please, please keep it going! Five stars for your amazing work.

I'm glad you found the time to develope your charcters after all.

Thank you

Sorry, but she physically wounded him, drawing blood, within the first few days of his servitude. Now the reader is supposed to believe that the slave sees portions of his servitude as a game? He is dissociated and she is a psychopath.

Five stars.

hilarious :)

i also thought that the reference to bowling was hilarious...i wonder now how her sisters roll will play out in this series...i love the way that you weave an inconsequential detail into the story.

I am wondering how this can end now. I am also scared like Laurel that this relationship will change. As I read this (which I am thoroughly enjoying) I am becoming involved as if I am participating, and do not want the mistress/slave relationship to end. Infact, I want Laurel to become even more of his mistress with more demands with his punishments and humiliations. How I would want if I were Jared, more oral/body worship and even the swallowing of her body fluids. Hope I am not being too pretentious. I love your story.

The romance is alive in this dominant relationship... so beautiful