All Comments on 'A Mother's Promise Ch. 18'

....as expected. I try not to anticipate what is going to happen, but, for this one I can't help it. What's coming next? What ever it is, I'm sure I'll be dripping wet reading it.

this whole series so far keeps my little 5" penis so hard, can't wait for more

My wife and I read your stories (and others as well). I'm a life-long cross dresser/sissy so we both dress up in our slut stuff and read stories and diddle each other. I've yet to get through on of you stories with out a major accident. Please get Bobby to his fathers cock - - SOON!!!

Loved the long chapter and could continue reading more. I knew the shave was coming and love that look on a man! Now get going on #19.

Hugs

chapter of this totally hot and amazing epic. PBP, you are an amazing writer and provide such a rich visualization of Bobby in that bed. My panties are soaked from all the jilling off I had to do!

Sign me up for any day of the week....if only such a place exsisted I would be their best customer....thanks for your help in blowing off a load

I cant even tell u how many orgasms you brought me too. I guess since im also a mom, i feel an extra connection with this story. Thank you and get 19 done please....

Betsy

Took me two days to read this super hot story and I probably got carpal-tunnell from pulling on my dickie so long. When Sherry kissed her son with her mouth filled with his cum, I licked the cum off my hand. I wish I had a woman here to snowball with. Great story and make #19 come quick.

I am sitting here breathless (again). This whole story is perfect holiday treat. I've been trying to read a few chapters each day and now I am done. I can't remember reading anything this hot for a long time. My husband is wondering why I've been dragging him to bed so early each night, but he's not complaining. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you!

What I want to know now is, when is he going to turn into a full (blown) queer?? Homo, gay, lesbian or whatever you want to call it, when does his mom finish turning him into her little (ass slut?) Damn people I'm only asking, so don't any of you have a heart attack!!

another outstanding chapter of top erotica. It's not so much the twists and turns right now, as the continuation as one new experience after another comes Bobby's way. This is writing, not set for any specific gender, but enjoyable for all. Keep it up, up and up!

It just keep's getting better, can't wate to read more.

I've loved every single minute of this story but... But... It's been like 3 weeks now, where's the next chapter??? :-) I do so hope that Mom is his first, and that cute friend of his turns out to be his girlfriend or wife before this is all over. Excuse my drooling.....

please continue the whole family needs to get in on the fun

I just received an email from the writer. In the email i was told it will be a couple of weeks until we see the next chapter. The writer is taking care of a matter that is more important at the moment. I too cant wait to see 19, but understand and send Pro_ball_player all my love

Betsy

My mommy must have seen your story. I left it on my computer. After I saw her getting off stroking her huge clit like bobbys aunt. She left out some black panties and bra on my bed a razor and shave cream.MY 5 inch cock will fit in those panties. After I remove all my pubic hair.Please hurry with your next chapter. I WANT A REAL HARD COCK UP MY BOY PUSSY. JUST LIKE BOBBY AND A MOUTH FULL OF FRESH CUM. TIMMY

cant wait for the next one!

please write 19 asap!

Title says it all, I try to check every day.

Heeey, where's the next installment??? You haven't forgotten about all your drippy, drooly, apreciative readers have you??? I've loved this series so far, PLEEEEEASE continue!!!

Christi

Please continue the story. I can't wait for the next procedure, and for him to get home.

You've managed to capture a lot of my hot buttons. I read the series over 3 or 4 days and couldn't wait to read the next installment.

pleas PBP i'm so horny i can't wait any longer

i have been letting my son to wear panties as long as he is staying with me at home

at first he reject the idea of wearing feminine cloths

but after 2days he start to like it now he he wears nothing but panties and shirts in home

You have to write the next one fast. This one was too good couldn't help masturbating to it. God, how I wish I was Bobby. I wish my family was like his, man, I would have such an escellent sex life. Please finish the next one ASAP.

After reading the first 10 chapters, I sent the writer an e-mail stating how empty my balls were at that time from his great story... He responded quickly how glad he was for me. Pressing issues came up and it was not until now that I was able to finish with chapter 18. Once again, my balls are so empty that even though I can cum quickly thinking about all those wet panties (and the school friend standing there watching too), there is nothing shooting out but maybe a drop or two!!! I guess I'll have to wait for an hour or two before my next cum in order to be able to produce more jism! And this quick question: As I was reading the rest of the comments here, I can't help but wonder why anyone would rate this series with a 50 percent??? Isn't that a question? What's wrong with that person?!!

OOOOOHHH! This story really makes me into a Jack-off demon!! I've never squirted so much cum before. I have three jism-soaked hankies and a cock that is STILL stiff and throbbing! I'm typing with my left hand while my right is pounding my cock..I'm gonna CUMMM again!!!.....AHHHHHH! I want MORE!

In the next session the mother should be shaved

i've being waiting for a long time for the next chapters, are you thinking on quiting?

i hope no!!!!!

well i guess i just keep waiting; you are the most amazing writer

This sequel is amazingly sexy and made me so wet thinking what will happen next with the son

Mmmmmmmmmmmm is so inspiring hehe

God I love this series! Please continue with it! So many different angles, Katie, Mum, Erika, Sis... this could go anywhere and I really hope it does!

somewhere in this story lurks at least one condom with about a quart of Bobby's cum in it, what has become of it, or is to be used in one of mom's surprises.

Damn that was so hot!! And when little Katie touched him I thought he was going to loose it for sure. But now I'm very curious as to what the final procedure could possibly be. I hope we learn about the rest soon.

Wheres the rest man?

I think I leaked about the same amount, read all 18 in one sitting cannot wait for this series to continue. Great writing.

I want more....Please...This was great but I want more...

simply outstanding due to over stimulation i had to take several break's before i was able to get through all 18 chapters now when are you going to give us the next chapter of this great saga.

I'm sorry you died, Pro_Ball_Player. The story was getting completely out of control with craziness, but it was still something I looked forward to reading.

this is a brilliant story, PBP, don't ruin it by leaving off the last 10 pages!

Wow! This story is sooo seeeexxy! It's got everything: romance, lust, great characters - and, every character has their own angle. What's to become of Bob, his mother, his aunt, uncle and father - and we can't forget his sister either. Please, please, we're waiting for more great writing from you. Don't leave us hanging! Please finish the story! Please.

That was awesome tell more makes me want to masterbate!

I read this story and am left with the feeling that mother is a lying,manipulative, selfish bitch.

After all of the promises not to tell anyone the secrets that Bobby told her mother went out and told everyone she thought could help her use and abuse him.

By the end of the 18th chapter I was wishing that mother was kidnapped and sold as a sex slave to a cruel master for the way she abused her son's love. What a bitch.

This is an incredible story. I loved every word, couldn't wait to finish each page, but wanted to draw it out because I didn't want to get to the end!

Please please please continue, I love the story and the characters are real and I need to find out what happens next.

Thank you for writing and posting this.

Come on Please Finish it! This the longest and best story I have read on this site! You have to finish it, not just for me but for everyone on this site that reads it! and if I do say so myself, turn it into a book! I'm sure alot of people would love to read this. all i got to say is I Love this Story!

I'd loe for the next procedure to give him a full fem makeover. Do her nails, makeup, and hair then take him shopping before taking him home to his sister and dad. Let him be the woman she can be. So far I have loved this story and cann't wait for more. This is the life I wish I had led except for the dad part but you never know in the right situation you never know what might happen...

hi good one. let me know asap once ur ch 19 is ready. my email id johnvinith123@gmail.com

Thank you for this amazing series. I know it's been 3 yrs but hopefully you will continue and finish it.

I have read and re-read all 18 chapters several times. I hope sometime soon you can give us more. You are a wonderful writer.

U have to complete the story common can't end the

story in this way

Please keep this story alive I have really enjoyed it. Don't leave use hanging.

Seriously -- This needs more chapters! Dad reaming his ass, losing his cherry -- his mom finally giving in. Come back & finish!!

I really enjoyed this story. You did a great job with the flow and the details. Keep up the great work and I hope you decide to add more chapters!

Now you cant stop this story now lol esp as I read and enjoyed all the rest - you know we want to hear all about the evening with the family and all about katie.

Assuming that you still keep up with this site and are actually reading this comment, I have just got to say that this is my number one favorite series of all time.

I just feel like you left it one chapter short. It would seem that two things need to happen. Bobby needs to seduce and be fucked by his dad, and he needs to finally take his mom's pussy. I would so love to see this series properly finished off.

But if not, thanks anyway for writing an amazing story.

Please keep on writing this story.I am egerly waiting!!!

Your grammar was fine, and your erotica content enough, but what made the awful was you constantly lead on to orgasm and then stop.

If you keep writing like that then all your readers are going to contract retarded ejaculation, and no one wants to not have an orgasm while reading or looking at erotic material. Because many people like me can't ejaculate with a women, not till she wants to stop, then oh well.

Your material is like a teasing Philippino whore, all looks little to not put out.

maybe if you write with your characters getting off more, because no one likes only teases and plus no one wants to read about how he went to the grocery store, or anything that's not full of sex and orgasms, not this and that.

over all you need to redevelop your self as and author.

Terrific! One of the best written erotic stories i have read in a long time. Good detail and realistic in it's description. Great Job!

big fan..we want more stories

Just a selfish suggestion on my part, but in a future chapter, if there is one. Have Mom and Dad leave for the weekend, with instructions that he's to be punished and have Linda, invite some of her friends over to tease and deny him all weekend. I'd love to see some more restraint and some hard spanking....taking the story in a less bi fashion and more femdom.....okok....what can i say, great story!

I bet Dad cums in his ass while he cums in his sister and Mom cums in his mouth. What a way to die. Forget the die part but if I was going to die that would be the way would want to go.

bobby's sister should dominate him and force him to call females as mistress, and with mother, make bobby to get some boobs and feel like real girl.... it may bring more excitation...??

till when we have to wait for the next chapter......????? plz post the next chapter soon........

and i think if u make Bobby to get some Boobies as females and humilate him/her more by his mom n sister.... it may b great.....

YOU TELL A WONDERFUL STORY,IT IS A FANTACY FOR ME BUT MY HEART STILL BEATING HARD AND EVERYTHING ELSE.CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE.

the whole thig was GREAT i can't wait for you to finish it . I would like to see how he feels when he gets to screw his sister for the first time in a pussy. It felt like i was there watching him all this time. Makes me wish i was him .

I'm so looking forward to Bobby and his sister Linda doing it, so I can't wait to see the next chapter!

can you please do that panty fuck

awsome writer but yet again another unfinished story. dont have any recent postings did you quit writing?

damn,the whole story is great, hope you will continue soon

I am fascinated to find out what happens next

Hi.

I just wanted to, no had to, tell you how amazed i am with this story. It describes everything i want to happen to me with my family.

Please please please, write more.

Thanks so so much, Lisa x

I cannot wait to find out what will happen next. The story scrambler took me to the first chapter and I have read all of them over the past three days. Though some of the things bobby is doing and are into are not my own interests, we do share a few others. Keep up the great work.

I was wondering though if you have ever thought about to a side story of what Linda and dad are doing during all of this or maybe a prequel of when Linda gets caught doing something the same way Bobby did? Or possibly even a prequel of when Mom, uncle mike, and aunt Brenda started their adventures?

If you ever are on this website and writing again, please continue this story. Your tone and how the plot unfolds is simply magnificent. I actually considering writing a story of my own based around a similar plot (at least up until Linda walks in on him). Long story short, please continue!

Like everyone else whose has commented I find your storyline very engrossing. I know I have not found another Literotica submission with a similar theme,and that is difficult to accomplish. Your writing style is easy to follow, and your attention to grammar, spelling, and tense is excellent. Whoever is serving as your editor is doing an great job. In the last couple of chapters you have dropped enough hints aboutr future events to complete at least two more chapters; Bobby's Anal Fun With the Family; and :Katie Comes to Visit. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE DO NOT LET THIS STORY GO UNFINISHED!!!!!!!!!!

I was enjoying the beginning so very much, but soon felt utterly frustrated and disappointed. I only made it to chapter 12 then came here to read the comments. It appears that after 18 chapters he still hasn't really fucked neither his mom nor his sister. Why? Why? Why? Losing virginity by fucking his mother's ass? Not in my book anyway.

At the beginning, why did mother very seriously tell him that nothing funny may ever happen between him and his sister? She as kid didn't, and to this day doesn't have any hesitations fucking her brother. So why wouldn't she let their (adult) kids do what she enjoyed doing so much? Did she ultimately just want to make him become their loving little bitch as somebody already suggested?

He is not allowed to fuck her mom's pussy. Ok, it's somewhat explained, but there are a couple of details that really made me feel frustrated. Firstly, she says that her pussy is now reserved only for her husband. She then - with a feeling of guilt - tells him that she still "does things" with her brother, but that this knowledge must stay between the two of them. She then adds that his father knows everything. So why the secrecy when everybody's fucking everybody and everybody knows that. This made me believe that he is still fucking her "reserved" pussy. But if we assume that they have an agreement that she can continue to pussy fuck her brother, surely they can squeeze in the third cock, it's all within a loving family afterall?

I don't mind the teases, I really don't. Actually, I love them, but they've got to eventually lead to the big climax - the forbidden fruit - his mother's pussy and hopefully his sister's cherry. Oh, his father and sister. I might have missed it, but I don't remeber what type of restrictions his father has when it comes to his daughter. That left us with a possiblity that his father might be fucking both pussies, yet he himself can fuck neither. Just fucking great. ):

He even had the chance to fuck his mother's pussy, she fucking begged him to, yet he opted not to, even though he badly wants to. He might hurt his father's feelings. And her brother's feelings too, maybe. He decided to lose his virginity by fucking her ass instead. Right...

I didn't mind the cum eating, ass fucking, I'm sure I would've loved the girly cock sucking scene with everybody watching. I just couldn't continue to enjoy the story, after feeling so frustrated that he was unrightfully being deprived of mom's (and sister's) pussy. I was hoping he would talk to his dad and tell him, hey dad, I want to fuck your wifes pussy. She wants it, I want it. You can fuck your daughter's pussy if you haven't already. I'm sure you want to and I'm sure she wants it too. So what's the big fucking deal?

You've gotten many possitive comments, so I'm sure you won't be too troubled with my rant, just wanted to say why I stopped reading a story I so enjoyed the beginning of.

Forget what Glimseye said, I have enjoyed the series, my only issue is that you stopped. I check every so often to see if there is more, but its been a long time, I have read the series four or five times. As far as Glimseye, he or she does not even have one story posted, write your own story. As for you pro ball player open the keyboard and start back up.

I have read this story several times I think it is maybe my favorite.Just really well written however I am afraid the old boy is dead.If he is not dead I wish he would give us a few more chapters for a little closure.Before I pass on myself I suspect he has some age on him like me if he still lives.If he is still out there may he have peace and health more than mine.

Sadly it is 2015 wish someone can restart this series where it left off and continue bobby sexual adventure, weather it be with his dad, his sister, more at the salon, or his friend kaitie

The mother is a serious manipulator manages to turn a perfectly normal boy into a homosexual.Gays are made not born life experience not DNA ! hidden secrets and molestation .All said a masterful job anyway,the mother corrupted the whole damn family starting with her brother then husband right down the line.All to feed her sick fantasies.Good story anyway by a fantastic writer whom I suspect has passed.

Not what I would have thought I would like but it was so well written I sure wish someone would finish it.

please add further more chapters I already read up to 18...its really really awesome. . Please please add more n more chapters..I will wait for it

Three times I was going to stop reading this story I wish I bloody did. What a waste of time. Not only is this story nearly 10 years old. clearly it's not going to be finished. For fuck sake 17 chapters really !!!!! You could have condensed this down by at least half this. I feel so sorry for this guy. Clearly all he ever wanted was to be normal and fuck his mother and sister up the CUNT and only went along with his crazy fucked up and manipulating mothers fantasies to reach his dreams and desires. 1 star only and that's being generous....

Very long, very repetitive, Every one of these chapters is twice as long as they need to be. Just a very long drawn out series with not much of a payoff.

this is by far the best story ive ever read its best left unfinshed that we can play out the ending ourselves well dont and thank you

best story ever please please please submit next chapter soon

I can't wait for more chapters.

I should have stopped after they watched each other pee. That was the best chapter and it got worse after that.

This story is so hot. I wish there was more

Both loved and hated this one. Guess I'm not submissive enough. Would like to see it finished though.

Nice hook at the end. "... the last procedure.", indeed. Shouldn't that be "the NEXT procedure"? We know this can go on for a looong time.

I only have one editing quibble. I've noticed in several stories lately that "shutter" (which is a covering for an opening) is being used in place of "shudder" (which is a brief shaking movement). It's a very minor flaw in a delightful series.

This story is captivating!! Please update asap. It's been so long since last installment. PLEASE!?!????

This is the best story on this website hands down. Please give us a new chapter. You have put so much work into this amazing story. Please don't let the story end here. Please?!?

Many thanks.

Very hot!

More, please.

I get completely involved. readed 2 times.

Makes me horny as Hell.

Hope you write more ...

Someone has to make an erótica movie out of these story.

Just make a new chapter already

Please keep the great work and story alive.

Can't wait, so captivating.

You need to go to the next procedure and then about the trip home and the family gathering waiting for Bobby

One of the hottest , most erotic incest stories I've read yet. Please tell me you have one or two more chapters planned !

o my dear god this story is hot as hell. i wish it would have been finished.

Wow

God I loved it. Please continue. Make Bobby a real girl.

This is by far one of the best stories and can see ware this can be added on to for years. Keep it coming.