All Comments on 'A New Job'

Concise writing. Stimulating story. This appears to be your first story posted to the site. If so, you are off to one hell of a good start. Keep writing. I'll be looking for more of your work.

Did you ever see a show on television or a movie wherein the ending left you hanging out a little? Maybe you felt a little frustrated, wanting more (like some women in my life!) You write very nicely and the subject matter, though done before, was nice. I suggest you keep writing!!

Beautifully written short erotic fiction. Could be the start of a very popular "New Job" series.

I love Jessica bringing up the HR film after her boss forcibly removed her panties on the first day of work. "But the HR film!" Very witty line. Makes her seem innocent.

The boss is so calm and collected. This story is subtly good in many ways. Dialogue. Narration. What a debut for TheWritingWife!

This made me so wet, I love it when a man asserts his dominance over women. Great story :)