by rocketgirl2011
What is worth all the rapey scenes. What's wrong with consensual sex? Good story but he's creepy.
I deff luv this story and can't wait to see what else you have in store for Bella and Alex. Please update soon!! And lol @ anon. hehe 1-800-missing? haha too funny hehe
Why is she playing with the man? Alex told her not to date his friends, did she think that he was joking?
Alex told her not to date any of his friends, but Ms. Fast Azz just wouldn't comply. This is how women end up missing.
P.S. Ya'll know white boys are CRAZY!!!
You might as well use your imagination of what the ending is going to be, this author has a habit of not finishing her stories. :(
OK I loved the past chapters now WHAT. When r u coming back to write some more of this story. I need to know what is happening.
Really like the story. Please finish so I'll know what happens to Alex and Bella!!
I love the storyline. And I don't think I'd mind having my very own Alex!
Please, Please update!! I can't take the suspense. Alex sounds like one nutty control-freak. I need to know what happens to Bella.
I'm haunting, waiting for the rest of the story. Where is it? I am totally digging the dynamic, but definitely hungry for more. I feel Alex, but have little pity for him.
Will he man up and recognize or not??? That IS THE QUESTION!!!!
Ok, first off, LOVE the running commentary from Alpha_Marm. Second, cliffhanger much? It's still autumn, so I can't really complain too much about there not being a chapter 5 yet. Third, not that it's a bad thing, but are they all really a little warped, these men of ours?
I love this update- but she needs to get away from this nutjob. No wonder he doesn't have a regular g/f: he's gone off the deep end after only a few weeks. Crazy douchebag is not attractive, no matter how good he is in bed.
The chick has more power than she's aware of.
Male ego isn't letting him see true. His stupid ass thinks it's about his control.. his say.
Hell to the NO!!! He is so whipped it ain't funny....somebody needs to wake up to reality.
My money is on her. She just needs to recognize. He lost power a few good fucks ago.
Wow, what is it about Rick that really makes Alex insecure or is it just the Bella isn't under his full control? I like her better with Rick, hopefully she will find a way to get away from Alex. Interesting turn of events; Alex is a little scary in his possession. Great writing.
Love this submission you presented. Bella is definitely in trouble emotionally. I can't wait to see what happens next with these two.. Please finish the series. Thanks :)
turn of events. what's next i wonder. are we ever going to learn anything about these two? why does ALEX do this type of arrangements?
As always, the chapter was well written and fascinating to read. However, I'm going to differ with most of the respondents about Alex. As a former EMT, I've had the "pleasure" of running many calls on the behalf of girlfriends and kept women of controlling men. In the beginning, the barely restrained jealousy and forceful control always seems sexy and romantic, but in the end it results in a woman battered and abused. Alex is not in control of his emotions, they control him. In the real world, Bella would not be safe, emotionally or physically.
damn this was a good chapter, I wish one of them would just admit they might have feelings for each other.