All Comments on 'A Nice Surprise for Brian Ch. 02'

Well you want feedback, I'm not too good at it, but still, I'll say this, you only got a four rather than a five because there wasn't an ending.

Personally I want her raped, violent ending. Abused by the both of them, possibly with Brian snapping and raping the boy and punishing him so he couldn't manipulate them more, or something like that

please please write some more i love it

i want a happy ending please

good work keep it up.

It seems obvious that Jen has the heart of a true slut sleeping inside her. Wake it up! Make her love it! Make her realize just how much she enjoys being the Naughty Girl. Bottom line.... Happy ending!

Let them hurt her, then soothe a little. She needs a good violent fucking. Just keep going

pop 54 please continue because you have a winner her. Brian, Jenney and Pete.

make it an enjoyable time for all three and a happy ending please

Don't stop now, finish the story. I prefer a happy ending but YOU are the author.

I love twisted stories, but they are the ones that definitely need a happy ending, don't you think? I would like to hope so.

Ultimately, your story, your ending.

This is just getting good, and now it's done? I'm all worked up and need a resolution. They need to make good on their plan and DP the slag.

... get to it.

Left us hanging

I vote for her pleasure

I'm hoping for some more pain for Jenny. Loving the tale so far!