by pop_54
I'm hoping for some more pain for Jenny. Loving the tale so far!
This is just getting good, and now it's done? I'm all worked up and need a resolution. They need to make good on their plan and DP the slag.
I love twisted stories, but they are the ones that definitely need a happy ending, don't you think? I would like to hope so.
Ultimately, your story, your ending.
Don't stop now, finish the story. I prefer a happy ending but YOU are the author.
make it an enjoyable time for all three and a happy ending please
pop 54 please continue because you have a winner her. Brian, Jenney and Pete.
Let them hurt her, then soothe a little. She needs a good violent fucking. Just keep going
It seems obvious that Jen has the heart of a true slut sleeping inside her. Wake it up! Make her love it! Make her realize just how much she enjoys being the Naughty Girl. Bottom line.... Happy ending!
please please write some more i love it
i want a happy ending please
good work keep it up.
Well you want feedback, I'm not too good at it, but still, I'll say this, you only got a four rather than a five because there wasn't an ending.
Personally I want her raped, violent ending. Abused by the both of them, possibly with Brian snapping and raping the boy and punishing him so he couldn't manipulate them more, or something like that