All Comments on 'A Night Elven Night'

But the way its worded, just feels ameture, No offence to the author but if you wish to add flaire to it, draw out the scene, instead of her simply asking for sex. Have her be more subtle. "Elf A walks up from behind, eyeing, elf B, i dunno simply reachest within his hem of his robe stroking his member as she asks" somthing like that.

Man night elves are sweet creatures (the ones to submit) in sex, not cruel. And by the way the story sounded a bit gay.

Your story started out as a solid idea, but most people (myself included) would be severely turned off by "Dick Girls". A rewrite of this for a more accepted audience would have much more popularity.

More like genius.

get a life and a girl friend

Wow I guess I should stay away from Night elf chicks then. Keep up the good work I enjoyed the story it was actually kind of funny to me

This is by far one of my favorite stories on here, NightmareMachine. I always love TS content, but this was amazing. I really hope you post some more WoW themed TS content. I'd wholeheartedly enjoy it!

Keep up the good work!

What the fuck.

God dammit. No futa / girlboy warning?

This should be in the gay section