All Comments on 'A Night Elven Night'

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hardheadd1hardheadd1almost 11 years ago
gay

This should be in the gay section

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

What the fuck.

God dammit. No futa / girlboy warning?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Quality work, friend.

This is by far one of my favorite stories on here, NightmareMachine. I always love TS content, but this was amazing. I really hope you post some more WoW themed TS content. I'd wholeheartedly enjoy it!

Keep up the good work!

LegionsOfLiesLegionsOfLiesabout 12 years ago
The fuck???

Wow I guess I should stay away from Night elf chicks then. Keep up the good work I enjoyed the story it was actually kind of funny to me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow

get a life and a girl friend

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Twisted?

More like genius.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good idea, but...

Your story started out as a solid idea, but most people (myself included) would be severely turned off by "Dick Girls". A rewrite of this for a more accepted audience would have much more popularity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Surely not what I expected

Man night elves are sweet creatures (the ones to submit) in sex, not cruel. And by the way the story sounded a bit gay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Mabye its just me...

But the way its worded, just feels ameture, No offence to the author but if you wish to add flaire to it, draw out the scene, instead of her simply asking for sex. Have her be more subtle. "Elf A walks up from behind, eyeing, elf B, i dunno simply reachest within his hem of his robe stroking his member as she asks" somthing like that.

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