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dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
Good

A nice little story. This is what "Loving Wives" should be.

seasparksseasparksalmost 20 years ago
Yes indeed

And I like the stream of consciousness format

lyricalcandylyricalcandyover 19 years ago
Very Nice

Short and sweet, a very loving, intimate sort of sweetness. One of your other comments says "this is what loving wives should be". I kind of feel about this one the way you felt about my "Another Night to Remember", I was pleasantly surprised, because it wasn't what I would have expected from this category. I'm glad you left me feedback since it lead me to discover your writings, I'm about to go read more. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Everyone needs

A Night Out once in a while. My heart swells with the abundant beauty of your love.

wonderfully done.

v~

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New name, same old smut. Please also check my favorites - my wife's stories, although she's in retirement (temporarily)

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