by Quietguy63
... the consummation was very weak - the blow job in the cab was okay (it happens, though cabbies have told me the passengers are almost always drunk or stoned, which yours weren't)
The hotel room scene was pro forma - look up some of TonyTon3's stories from 12-14 years ago - they had a sameness after a while, but he strung out the disrobing, and made it hotter, than any writer I can remember