All Comments on 'A Night to Remember'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
very hot

What a nice story, two friends exploreing their fantasy's.

Id like to see them get more involved and then maybe going to a lesbein club and picking up the woman of their choice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
could be great

loved the make up of the story but to make it great you need to learn to do conversation

"Dont you love it when they play "touch yourself"? she asked longingly?

just too hard to read without it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
PLEASE learn how to write conversation

THis story could have been good but without the proper usage of quotes, it became nearly unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great work of art

this really is a great story.

sexykitten123sexykitten123about 11 years ago
Incredible

No words can describe how amazing that was to read. It was as if you picked my brain and put my fantasy on paper; it was so erotically written that I sort of lost where I was while reading. Thank you so much for writing it-I loved it so much.

metroalmametroalma3 months ago

34cm hips???? That's 13.4 inches. I would think typo but you did it again for the other girl 36cm hips.

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