by OneTouchMystery
What a nice story, two friends exploreing their fantasy's.
Id like to see them get more involved and then maybe going to a lesbein club and picking up the woman of their choice.
loved the make up of the story but to make it great you need to learn to do conversation
"Dont you love it when they play "touch yourself"? she asked longingly?
just too hard to read without it
THis story could have been good but without the proper usage of quotes, it became nearly unreadable.
No words can describe how amazing that was to read. It was as if you picked my brain and put my fantasy on paper; it was so erotically written that I sort of lost where I was while reading. Thank you so much for writing it-I loved it so much.
34cm hips???? That's 13.4 inches. I would think typo but you did it again for the other girl 36cm hips.