A Proper Goodbye

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"That was incredible, Eva." He said.

He kissed the top of her forehead as he closed his eyes, still struggling to get his breath. Curiously, Eva reached between his legs and slid off the condom, careful not to spill any. She smiled as she saw how much he came because of her. She glanced over and Justin looked like he was sleeping. She took the condom and threw it in the trash, pushing some old paper towels over it so her roommate would know what they had done. She threw on her clothes, careful not to wake him. She let him sleep for a few minutes before waking him up.

"I'm sorry that I fell asleep." He said.

"Don't worry about it. I am just glad that you enjoyed yourself." Eva laughed.

"Yes, I most certainly did. Did you?"

"I did. Of course I did." She smiled.

Justin reached for his shirt and pulled it down over his head.

"I don't want to go." He whispered.

"I don't want you to go either. But Maria will be back soon. I think that would be a little awkward, don't you?" Eva laughed.

"Yeah, probably" Justin finished dressing.

He wrapped his arms around her and picked her up in his arms. They embraced for a moment followed by one last goodbye kiss.

Eva walked him to the door.

"I am going to miss you."

"You know I will miss you too, Eva. I hope to see you again. Some day down the road?"

"I would like that very much."

And with that, Justin walked out the door. They never did see each other again.

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Plainly_JanePlainly_Janeabout 16 years ago
Very sweet and romantic, with a bittersweet ending

Hey Darkr -- I also enjoyed this short story, romantic love. <br><br>

<i>As soon as either one of them, if not both, were off the clock, they could be found somewhere quiet in a warm embrace, their lips locked tightly together in deep, passionate kisses. </i><br><br> Mmmmm, very nice. Passionate kisses don't get enough play sometimes in Lit stories - but they are wonderful.<br><br>

I have only one teensy comment, I wouldn't even call it a criticism. The wording "erupted" for describing her orgasm, I think that might be more appropriate for a man than a woman. Now some women might disagree with me.<br>

<i>She erupted around the condom deep inside her. </i>

<br><br>But I'd say women slowly build to orgasm, and then it's more like a wave rolling over you, starting at your core and radiating outwards, pulsing, spasming. But that's a mere quibble!

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