All Comments on 'A Queen's Knight Ch. 04-07'

Don't bad but not great, could be somemore details on the battle but not bad.

Thankyou again

good story, but where's the sex?

It's good to know people are reading and enjoying my work. First, I'd like to appoligize that my stories are coming in such short incriments. Please bare in mine, I'm a fulltime student with a heavy schedule. Please be patient.

Second, I know I've been teasing with hints of sexual tension, but I promise, the sex will cum (pun intended). Again please be patient.

Third, I apologize for the abreviated battle scene. I realize now it was a mistake, and I'm sorry.

Thank you again,

Cephus Smith

While the basis for your story is good. I would get someone to proof read the stories to fix the spelling errors.