All Comments on 'A Revealing Experience Ch. 02'

SHORT TEASES ARE NOT A STORY. WAKE UP YOUR PARTS 1 AND 2 , COULD HAVE BEEN ONE. AND NOT A REAL GOOD ONE. UNLESS YOU PICK UP THE PACE , AND GET HOTTER. QUIT WILE YOUR AHEAD. DON'T MAKE A FOOL OF YOURSELF. SORRY BUT TO MANY WRITERS PULL THE SAME THING, 1 OR 2 CHAPTERS AND YOU NEVER HEAR FROM THEM AGAIN.YOU HAVE STARTED OFF WITH A GOOD IDEA. NO MORE OF THIS TO BE CONTINUED CRAP. TELL YOUR STORY, DON'T BE A TEASE. .LAROC OF AGES

After over 30 days of waiting?

A good way to kill a good story

So...no more submissions.

Forget the 30 days. Your critics were enjoying the story...the delay made them mad.

You had a good story going. Don't wimp out.

Thanaks Don

It's negative comments like the ones on this story which have made me reluctant to post any new stories to this site. You've got a good story going here, post new parts a paragraph at a time if you want to, but I think it's worth adding to.

All the best Pete

I have thoroughly enjoyed your first two chapters. I hope there will be more! I think sometimes would be authors thinks they have to have 3-4 pages to a chapter. You have obviously thought out your story line and decided on a course of action. I read chapter one and at first was little disappointed it ended so soon; but not for the usual reasons. I thought for a few minutes what I would like to see next, and then I found chapter two. It went exactly where I hoped it would go. Thank-you. I am now only saddened that I am awaiting your next installment. I look at your story aliken to the movie serials of the 30's-50's, just enough to excite and put you on the edge of your seat for next week's episode.

Although society may not approve my favorite sexual erotic fantasies are: 1) mother/son; 2) submissiveness and control; 3) sex and control; 4) white woman-black man.

Thank-you for sharing your fantasies with us.

Sincerely your s*n;

John

Will there be a part 3?

don't bother

1 star. Hate unfinished stories

Plain stupid story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!