All Comments on 'A 'Sapphire" in the Rough'

Great Story! This was not only well written, but damn entertaining. Great Job.

now that was intense as well as hot. she is fair game for josh and anybody else that wants some. keep it going.great job!

I loved your story. I will definately read more!

excellent...very well done...needs ch. 2...and 3...and more...

cant wait to read more of the storie does he go back for more and does josh help?

That story was so hot. I couldn't help but play with my pussy as I read it and I cummed hard at the end. Pleeeeeeeasse make another chapter. This first one was soo great.

VERY VERY HOT i couldnt help but finger my pussy to that and i wanna no did mommy and son fuck?

This was a great story.

wow

If you have any compassion whatsoever you will finish that story! I am dying to know what happened between mother and son, as well as if Jack is through with her.

After being away for several years he spots his boyhood friend's mother dancing nude in a club. Having had a boyhood thing for her, he quickly carries things to the next erotic level. Good Read.

Oh come on - you cant just end it there and expect your readers to wonder what the hell!! That was a captivating and very erotic story that really got to me and my wife. Loved it so would you please addon to it?

Blackmail, lust, and incest! OMG! Make a series, i definitely want to read more to see what happens!

more more more!

Cool story, bro.

Not much of a friend was he? Well written.

I love the narration and dirty talk. :) Wonderful story and awful awful friend!

please write more, so damn good

More please more!!!!!!