All Comments on 'A Scene'

by FinlayAdhar

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stephenchapmanstephenchapmanabout 11 years ago

Very romantic. Wish it had a bit more tension.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
just fine as it is

I'm not sure what type of tension Mr. Chapman wants. Too often 'tension' just means ugliness in this catagory. This was a wonderful scene between loving partners who want just that. Thank you and I would read more.

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