All Comments on 'A Second Life Ch. 09'

your development of the characters and the story tugs at heart as well as other extremities. The descriptions of the places and backgrounds make the story seem as we are there truly great work and hope for more to come soon. Tell me Mel is pregnant and Chelsie is probably as well after her weekend romp.

GREAT Story line! Keep It UP!

ENJOYED READING!

I hope you finish the story but I don't think you will since it's been so long since you posted CH9 but I hope you do

You have have one huge fan that is waiting out here for the next chapter. I keep checking back if you post another one. Thanks

Great Story but like most on here unfinished LOL you get a 1

I loved it. An unending series of truly erotic tableaux creating fantastic pictures in the mind of giving, giving and not taking. The last is the most important aspect of the entire story - every one in the story gave with love and accepted with love, but not one ever took from another - almost an unheard of concept in today's world.

Some comments seem to want this story to go on forever, I recommend that it be considered completed where it is. But please develop more loving stories of giving without taking.

Pity it has not been continued or finished.

Time for a chapter 10, where the remote connections now include 3D, and all 4 have added numerous internet connected interactive toys for their remote play dates. Maybe some e-stim for all to forced orgasms. So much to add yet, maybe Chel gets a local plaything to share. Come on, you know you can do this.