All Comments on 'A Slave to Passion'

by Svejk

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voyer61voyer61about 13 years ago
Great start

This is a great start you can do a great deal with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WoW!

Keep them coming! I feel like when my husbands gets me close to cumming then takes it away and makes me "wait for it"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Waitin on more....

great story so far

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
cant wait for the next one!

Cut out the other guy and this story could become the best new series on the site

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A good start

I'm interested in seeing what happens next.

One nitpick though: first you say there have been cases of humans and orcs interbreeding, then you say they keep sex slaves to prevent pregnancy. Are humans and orcs cross-fertile or not? Or did you mean just the penis-packing orcs use the sex slaves? This seems like either a mistake to be corrected, or an ambiguity to be cleared up.

secret_guysecret_guyalmost 13 years ago

Awesome Story. Waiting for next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing start.

I'm eagerly awaiting your next part. It would truly be a shame if this story were not finished.

Hobgoblin2099Hobgoblin2099over 11 years ago

Are you never going to continue this? :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fantastic Fantasy!

Awesome awesome awesome!!! This was a beautiful read, I look forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Waiting for the next chapter!!

I want to see him fucked by the orcs

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