All Comments on 'A Slave to the Servants Ch. 37'

I really enjoy both of her stories and have read them both multiple times. I wish that author would/could come back and write some more stories.

I really love this story. This story has done what others on this site hasn't. The emotions of these characters is written so well I felt all the loss that Ciara felt. The loss she felt when her children were taken from her, the fear Nu-reeh imposed, betrayal of her men at times and the joys at seeing her offspring. This story had me ugly crying and brought me joy.

Wishing I had this on my book shelves. Wishing you would write more.

The story had its ups and downs. There were things that Ciara would just 'forgive' that should not be forgiven without some real soul searching, I appreciate the fact that you didn't just ignore them and made a point of discussing them.

I really enjoyed this.

It was such a great story that had amazing erotica and an even more amazing plot, you really have to fall in love with the characters and I definitely have. Great author and this story should definitely be published it is excellent work, thanks for the amazing story.

Absolutely one of my favorites!! You did a phenomenal job in character development and continuity. I "knew" the family. Some stories could be continued, but no need, Lol it would mess it up. What else you have in that mind of yours?!! Great job!

Thank you for this amazing saga. From beginning to end you delved into the characters and their points of view, all while keeping me foaming at the mouth for more. The men were played so well with their stubbornness and inability to see Ciara's point of view, yet you could see that all they really wanted was for Ciara to always be with them. They loved her but you kept them men of Pateria, and didnt turn them into Earth men, Fantastic. Her children were all individuals and not Earth children. Again that was fantastic. I want to thank you for finally giving Rose a family of her own because she more then deserved it. So many nuances were picked up and not left to the imagination, while the story didn't feel rushed or just filled with needless scenes. Thank you Thank you Thank you. This is a job well done. I see you have stopped writing but I wish you would grace us with more stories. This was truly a treat

i have to admit parts of this story made me cry. other parts made me think you were a woman hating psychopath. but i have got to admit you got me emotionly envoved with your story. no mater what anyone else tells you. know this "you r one hell of a writer!"...trs

I have read the story 3 times I love it at parts it makes me cry others laugh and so want to scream. I wish you would come back and write another story I love the way you tell them

That is the only way to describe your writing. Every character, the plot, the settings...you have a gift. Most people visit this site to read dirty stories but I found myself more interested in the overall tale. I hope you add more.

From the first chapter to the last. It took me over a week and kept me from my bed more than once. I laughed, cried, guffawed and got horny. Thank you so much for the story and completing it and thanks to Steve too for the editing; brilliant work.

You have a natural talent for writing. Good plot, character development, and vivid scenes. This story, and your other, could easily be novels. I do hope you are continuing to write!

Excellent story plot with a lot of originality. Couldn't put it down. Needs much more editing though. Too many mistakes disrupt the flow. I still chuckle at ease drop when you meant eavesdrop!

To everyone who is reading this...I am a huge fan of DW and decided to write the next chapter.....instead of waiting for it. lol!! If any one cares to read it, I just submitted it and should be up in the next couple days...hope I live up to this amazing author!

I hope you are aware of the rules and requirements that Lit and it's moderators have about continuing someone else's story. They take copy-write seriously. You will have to get permission from the mods to continue it, you will have to add in new characters, take the plot in a different direction, leave some old characters out, and more.

Talk to JC_The_Continuer about the requirements and difficulties involved.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3059836

Often times it takes half a dozen edits and submissions for the Mods to approve a continuation. Not sure if you looked into it ahead of time or not, just giving a heads up.

I can't even use her world without permission. And since I can't get hold of her, the story is dead. Sorry guys.

I have found a wonderful new world. I honestly did not expect something with this callibre of storytelling, plot development etc, on this site. I'm so sad to finish this series. It was sooooo good. Well done, DW

Great, GREAT story

Thank you...deeply

This is my fifth read of this story, love it so much. Maybe you could somehow do another story of a different slave in this world

Really good story, it took a turn that I wasnt expecting I was pleasantly surprised. I would have loved to see more from the mens point of view especially when they were sperated from Ciara in the camp. They grew and learned so much during that time, but obviously you cant put everything in the story, I understand. But any way truly great story.

I have read this story more than 10 times and I still want to read it more. Good imagination and writing. you are very talented.

Best story I have ever read, I loved it so much! This has bring me great happiness, I didn't even care about the erotic part anymore, I simply wanted to learn everything about this world. Thank you for this amazing story!

Thank you for this story. Couldn't stop reading it. Please carry on writing

If you ever get bored you could write us glimpses into the kid's lives...

Loved series.Waiting with bated anticipation for chapter 38

Don't leave me hanging.Is Ciara's son for.Bane. human?Does Hannah become the General?

I thoroughly enjoyed this series and I hate to see it end maybe you should consider continuing the series with Ciaras children and the future of the planetA

Wonderful story! Wonderful characters! Wonderful writing!

I am at a loss for what to read next. I will miss this world and the folks who are in it.

I hope you might write more in the future.

I absolutely love this series & would like to suggest a spin-off story of Fuji's path to reclaiming her planet :D

It took me a week, but once I had started this story I could not put it down. Great work

Lit kept throwing this series at me in recommendations and every time, I read the synopsis and was like: "Alien abduction? No thanks". Eventually it happened, I opened up ch.1 without reading the synopsis and the story captured me for 37 chapters. Certainly a favorite!

This is the 4th time ive read this and i still love it!! I wish you would make more about them. I love the children and wish to know how they fare in their adult life!

This was a lovely Novel. In print, I think it would be quite large, wouldn't it?

She came from a hell, and was blessed with a lovely, if unconventional by Western Earth Standards, a wonderous family. I am familiar with multiple wives, but not multiple husbands, though I seem to remember reading about one culture where this was so.

I hope that you have kept writing and that you will reveal your work to those who enjoy your stories. I would in any genre.

Much peace

Gwen

I ABSOLUTLY loved this story. I pretty much ignored everyone while I read this story. I normally dont leave comments but this story and your skills are amazing. I would love to not only see this printed but would star in the movie. Lol... I just might have to tell my girls about this story. Again I Love This Story!!!!!

I am sad to see the story end. I will miss reading it. This was by far the best thing I have read on literoctica.

I did notice a typo on page 7 (I think): “he ordered wrapping his my long hair in his hands”. Not sure whose hair you want, maybe “my”.

Very well written and thoughtfull story

Thanks for sharing

The concept of freedom, sharing, love was thought provoking

Great story, the plot was dynamic with relatable characters and truly fabulous world-building. I look forward to the day that your little ones go off to school leaving you bored and itching to write again.

Words can not describe the feelings this novel gave me. This was more than just an erotic read. This was a story of life, love, strife, discrimination, finding freedom and happiness. Of all the books i have read i truly enjoyed this one and the inclusivity of sci-fi elements.

This story completely captivated me. I've spent nearly every possible free moment over the past 1-2 weeks reading this and it was absolutely amazing. You are extremely talented and I'm so happy I discovered this gem you shared. Thank you so much for posting and completing it!

It took me a week to read this story and i fell in love

I have never really had even a passing interest in reading sci-fi... always too much technical detail about something or some place that wasn’t real to begin with, making the tech talk essentially an elaborately ornate pile of horse crap. My position on the matter has long been: If I want sci-if entertainment, I’ll go to the movies. (Yes- I know— clearly I am missing the point of it all somehow....)

However!!! I wish to convey how much I sincerely enjoyed the manner in which you presented this story, and the enjoyable pace at which it consistently flowed (Too often one must endure copious loads of unimpressive, tiresome backstory and/or micro detailing, to get to the meat of a story, only to find that it wasn’t worth the effort). This literary submission immediately secured my interest at the onset of chapter one, and held it to the end. I appreciate the use of moderation when detailing everything from erotic encounters to temper tantrums. You provide enough text to convey mood and intended mental imagery, without overburdening the reader. It is a well written tale, that continues to entertain years later! Well done.

3rd time reading it again :~). Truly good enuf to be made into a movie of G.O.T. calibre even! Keep up.the terrific job!

I had read your other series and am in love with it but this series is the one I always come back to. Your writings I've always consider to be the best I've read on this site. I only wish that you were still writing. Baby should be in school by now and I'm sure we would all be thrill to see more from you.

This will be the second time I've read the entire series (last time was at least five years ago), and it is just as good as the first time, if not better. Please keep writing and adding more to the world of Pateria!

I love both of your series and have read them several times. I I love Ciara’s adopted world and the things her family overcomes. Come back and keep writing you are amazing!

Read Again, Great place to Visit! Your Stories Rock! Maybe in time you will pick up keyboard again? If Not, you left a Legacy!!

I totally binged this series. Once I started I couldn't stop. You really should consider publishing this because it's that good. The amount of detail you put into this was amazing and I hope you write a sequel at some point or maybe follow around another group (possibly Molly?).

I remember reading this for the first time as it was being released and now many years later it was good to read it again, however. I now have questions and I would love to have them answered, maybe in the style of a follow on. How long was Ciara on Pateria? Do they age the same? What will happen when she dies, will she join with the spirit? And what happened to Nu-reeh? Someone please help!

A spin off of this about Fuji's life and what happened with all the other slaves like her after they all were freed would be awesome!

This novel (yes novel) was beautiful! I love it! The planet the males the females all of it . Please write more.

Both books by this author I return to time and time again. With some minor editing, this could easily be published as could her other book. Would love a sequel to either.

A great story all the way through. One of the best I've read on these sites. Thank you for sharing this with us.

I absolutely adore this story, I have read it over and over and have just finished it for the fourth time and can guarantee I will come back and read it again. It’s a story with depth, intrigue and a truly captivating premise. When I read it I find myself lost in it and forget to eat and sleep I’m so engrossed. I rarely find myself reading and thinking to myself that it is so well written it could easily translate to the tv screen, but with this, it’s easy to see. I would love this to be published so I could have a copy on my bookshelf so that when I want to read it I don’t have to keep coming back to this website, every time I fear something will have happened and it won’t be there anymore. I love love love this book!!!!

This is my absolute favorite story of all time!! I only wish it never had to end. I liked feeling like I was a part of their lives!!! Thank you so much for sharing 🥰🥰

This is the best story on Literotica. It would deserve to become a movie!

I think a story bout fuji recruiting all the other former slaves of her race and how she liberates her world would be awesome!

I come back at least once a year to read through this masterpiece again. I don't know if you still read comments on this, but you've earned every compliment - the last chapter has almost 100k views as I write this.

I do wish you would someday surprise us and start a new journey with us, but as the Paterians say, family comes first. I hope your own child has grown strong and healthy and you're leading a happy life with your family wherever you are.

Thank you so much.

Came to revisit and reread this masterpiece again after years. I thought I had enough chapters to statisfy me until the end but it's never enough. I hope your family is doing well and that youll return to writing someday. I would love to read more about Ciara and her family, more aftermath is always welcomed in this universe. Too sad to say goodbye!

I just re-read this story and fell in love with all of the characters again. I was immersed in the people and locations. You are so talented and I love Ciara’s journey.

After so many years, you are still getting great reviews! This is one of the best stories on site. Thank you for all your work. I hope you and your family are doing great. Any urge to start a new story?

What a series. Now I'm looking for a nother long read. This was great. So the big question, will you write more in this series?

Thank you it’s been an amazing journey xx

Someone needs to turn this into a book or movie series. I’d love to see a spin-off with Fuji in Bantra!

AMAZING. From start to finish I was totally absorbed in the story and was sad to see it end.

Absorbing and excellently written adventure exploring many facets of freedom and power. Kept me hooked to the last word. Should be required reading for other authors on how to write an ending. 5 stars just aren't enough.

What a pleasant, joyous book this is. I so enjoyed your other story, and echo other folks on here, please come back. I know whatever story is itching to be told will have me glued to my tablet. Thank you, I was going through a lot of pain, physically and this lovely long read helped me in so many ways. Whatever you are doing and wherever you are, I hope it is blessed and joyous. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I don't know how many times I've read this and Bound to my Mates, I love both series, I hope you come back and write some more, your stories are never boring and I can't stop reading it. Already memorized the chararcters still coming back here to read it again and again and again...😊👌😊👍

When will you make this into a book? You really should look into it I've read worse story's. And this is so good it would be a waist not to publish it.

This series of stories is really great, one of my favourites. I really enjoyed the story line, with all the sudden and evolutionary changes in Ciara’s life. And in particular I am happy that the writer put effort in finishing the story.

Thank you for sharing this story here!

This is my third or fourth time reading this amazing story. I second everyone’s idea to have this published; it’s too good to sit here collecting dust! Ciara’s life with her men is beautifully written and every time I get to this last chapter, I spread the pages over several days to prolong the ending. Please come back! Please bless us with another perfect story.

I’ve just found your stories and read this one twice, back to back. Such wonderful storytelling.

I've read this story probably over fifteen times now since I found it over seven years ago. I love it so much! I hope that one day the author will give an update on what they are working on now, since I would love to read more stories by them.

I remember getting excited when you would update this story. I would by this book in a heart beat. Hope you are well. Would love an update.

This my 4th time reading this and I swear every single time is as exciting as the last. Tell me where to find your books!!!!!

A whole new world!!!

As an 80 year old man I have read a lot of erotica. These two longer stories on Literotica stand out as among the best in a very large field. Thank you for your many hours of work and your wonderful imagination.

A most delightful story. Reading it again is a joy. Thank you again and I hope you and your family are doing well!

I just finished reading 'A slave to the servants.' I really enjoyed the story as a whole. If I could vote on the story as a whole, I would give it four stars. Some of the chapters seemed to just carry the story, so I gave them three stars. I wish you had written about what happened to Nu'Reeh when she was carried off by the men in the last chapter.

Despite the few errors I noticed, it was still an excellent story.

i have read this story alot . it is one of my fav.

This was a great end to a great story!! I’m ashamed that having been on Literotica for 5+ years, I only now just heard of this amazing erotic epoch. I literally scheduled time in my days to read this behemoth because it is so worth it (although I did my calculations and 37 chapters, each on average 13k words would make this anywhere from 960-2100 pages long!) You managed to make me, a girl who only browsed fetish fic from time to time, be fully engrossed in a science epic fantasy erotica with slavery and orgy elements and it’s mesmerizing. I was surprised that Ciara/Rachel decided not to even visit Earth again for “one last goodbye”, and she’ll probably have to come to terms with the fact that on Pateria, she will never age (like Rose, who is frozen in her twenties), will likely only have Rose and maybe a handful of human acquaintances now, and will only have the sad/drunken/chaotic memories of her mom/Earth family. But I still felt like this was an appropriate ending for her. I will miss the adventures of this kinky , goofy, amazing Spartan bunch(with 6 children, 5 husbands, and dozens of extended family members , what more could one ask for), and I can only be sated by reading your other work (which I am internally grateful is only 20 chapters). Aside from a few slow points in the book and some unnecessary characters (was Vera really a needed side villain? Hmm) this is easily one of the best books on Literotica of all time. And all of the different types of people commenting on this story is proof of that. Well wishes and hope you and your family are warm and cozy somewhere reading these comments:)

I have been harsh in judging this story, but I wouldn't call it unwarranted, but perhaps unfair. The characters were the ones I had beef with. And perhaps the author for making up this world. I was uneasy, sick to my stomach when I read the majority of this story. The way they treated slaves were abhorrent, and I needed a place to focus my rage at the unfairness. This story has moved me through so many conflicting emotions, and even a few nightmares. But it was handled brilliantly. When Ciara was truly freed and kept from Damien and his brothers, I was annoyed, you taught me though, that she needed to heal. My respect for Ciara went through the roof after she truly began her journey to be free and heal, seeing the atonement Damien and his brothers went through and how they grew and learned as well, finally! Really forced the point home. Hannah and Kennedy did the right thing keeping them apart. I'm glad they found each other again. I got to heal along with Ciara and was able to forgive the upset reading this caused me. Even if I am still horrified and angry.

This ending was lovely, but I do find myself feeling dissatisfied not knowing what happened to Nu'Reeh (and Dinah) after she was taken away, I would have liked to see that woman pay for her transgressions or just know what happened with her.

I find the portals and their supposed connection to earth unbelievable, and I did try to ignore that for the most part. I also feel like many of the woman who were slaves aren't explored enough to my satisfaction. But I digress. I can survive.

Thank you DoctorWolf. This story will stay with me for a long time. For good or bad.

Amazing Story! Read several times, enjoy it each read. How you came up with it I have No idea but Glad that you Did. Maybe in time you will come up with Another?

The ONLY thing I didn't think belonged in this story was the strap on and what you had her do to him! Then you skipped the whole pregnancy and his joy at being a daddy to a child birthed by you. So you could skip to a quick end!

OMG!!!! This was such a wild, adventurous ride full of romance and scorching hot sex! I loved it! Thank you for writing and sharing this 😍😍

What a story arc! Very very original, reversal of gender power, aliens and dinosaurs, this truly had everything but the kitchen sink written into it along the way. I am very impressed at the way you wrote Ciara’s character throughout, who among us knows how we’d react in a similar situation?

I’d have liked more about the demise/redemption of Nu-Reeh, a follow up on Fuji and her fellow Batrans, but most of all I’d have liked to have known what Kaley and Kelli did after reaching the T’Vailk mountains and meeting the other women there, something amazing I hope. All that said I know you wound up the story to concentrate on the new addition to your own family, so I’ll say many thanks DoctorWolf for an absolute epic that really ought to have a (less sexy I fear) print edition! Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Drawn in completely from the very beginning. Perhaps a coincidence, but I am an ER nurse who happens to work with a certain female doctor whos name is Wolfe.

Well done Doc. My wife and I both loved the story!! I wish there were more.

I always come back to read this story once in a while. I hope you publish this one day, I would loved to owned a copy.

I love this story so much! It deserves to be in print. You are a fantastic and creative storyteller! ❤

Apparently, I'm 10 years late to the party. Then again, I had'n really discovered the internet, much less Literotica, when you wrote this. This was an incredible story. The world-building was impressive, and you took the time to do *real* character development (too many authors have characters listen to one impassioned speech or see one dramatic event, then pull a quick face-turn).

Your descriptions of collective conscousness were, again, far more detailed and captivating

Purplefizz's comment about "reversal of gender" might be true in whayever socity he/she lives in, but I have to say that in the U.S., that's not the case. The pervasive myth we have here in America that men have any power in our own lives really ticks me off. American men are taught that women are superior beings. We spend our entire lives trying to gain their approval and avoid their wrath; from being Mommy's "good boy" to giving up our friends and possessions to please our wives and meekly taking the psychological (which our society euphemizes as "mind games") and physical (which our society finds humorous - "he got beat up by a girl, ha ha ha!") abuse when we dare to say "no," to finally *paying* them to sign the divorce papers (which is all alimony really is - women *can* get jobs in the 21st Century!) when the abuse goes too far. Ciara's story resonates with me - especially being used as a breeder and a source of free labor. I just wish my story had a happy ending, too.

I started reading this series for the sex(obviously) After a few chapters I was so invested in the characters and what was happening to their world I was skimming the sex parts, to see what happened.

It was very enjoyable watching your writing develop over the chapters. Absolutely 5 stars

Absolutely amazing story! I couldn't read this fast enough. Kudos!

This is still the best story ever. I anxiously awaited every new chapter when they were being written. I laughed out loud, cried, and became angry with the family. Thank you. I hope you return back soon.

I started reading this story as a much younger and still horny person and at the time it was just the incredible smut that kept me coming and coming. But now after doing a reread …

This story made me feel so much in a time of my life where burnout from mental health struggles has brought me to my knees on many occasions.

The world building is phenomenal as are the cultures and societies you created. It’s so intricate I want to create a wiki just for it!

I was even inspired to draw after your incredible descriptions. We will see if I can do them justice.

I’m sad to see the story end, I could definitely read plenty more of this.

Thank you for bringing such a beautiful, deep and sensual story into being

This sorry deserves 100 stars!

Love the total uniqueness of this story, masterfully created and told. Thank you

I wish there was a sequel about Fuji fixing Betra or a short story about the girls that went back to Earth

I feel fortunate to have discovered this series. Very well written. I'd be fascinated to know how you track of all the characters whilst writing.

I just want to say I stumbled upon this by chance as Sci-fi isn't my usual read but I thought I'd give it a try. I was hooked from day 1. I haven't been able to put it down and am so pleased to have discovered it. You are a talented writer. Thank-you! Thank you for writing such a peice of art!

Very good series it is nice that you ended it in this way. You built it up gave the people feelings. it is a great. story .

May I say, this was a delightful well written story. I have been on a roller coater ride with emotions. I didnt always agree with the views and direction of the story, but was glad that i stayed the course.

I have been thoroughly entertained for the past week reading this.

Thank you for your efforts.

Ps.

Hope you and your family are well.

I never comment but you are a phenomenal writer!!! I enjoyed EVERY second of this book. This is what I come to these sites for.. it was the perfect mix of erotic and plot... I realize that you haven't been active for a very long time what w/ kids and work but if you ever came back I would LOVE to read Fuji's story and how she freed her whole planet!!! And if you've already written it... I'd pay to read it to. Also just a side note... I'd pay for this book as well just to support a fellow mom w/ a hobby! You have real talent and I'm not sure if it's just you or a team but it should def be explored.. xoxo💛💛

Ditto, ditto, ditto to all the last four commenters have said about this story! It was excellent, and I loved it very much. Here now, over 10 years after you finished it, I sincerely hope you and your daughter, and any others you may have had along the way, are enjoying a happy life. Thank you for this enjoyable read.