All Comments on 'A Slave's Story Ch. 04'

This is an unfinished story and given the amount of time that has elapsed it will remain so.

This story would’ve rated 5/5 the way it was going, but given that it is not complete it rates 1/5

Such a shame

I was enjoying this read and then it left me hanging. It was one of the better stories I have read. Please finish this

I dont like having my time wasted. Why you made such a farce out of a reasonable story only you know. If as you claim you have written an ending lets see it. The so called dual format could have worked if they were different rather than rehashed. If you did not finish this at least be honest and either remove it or label it. The first part may stand alone, the rest is pointless without a conclusion. -- UK CYNIC.