All Comments on 'A Slave's Training'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

As a fictional story this has a wide range of emotion flowing through it. I can sense a lot of tension in the story between the characters. I could see this tension building and at some point causing a real problem between the characters, so you've set it up for another chapter.

However if this were a real situation, as a submissive I'd be running for the door and not looking back. I would never want to be with a Dom that holds my feelings in such low regard. While as an owned submissive myself I would never go against my Master's wishes, I also know he would never make me do the very things in this story because he knows how I feel about these things. A good loving Dominant always keeps the feelings of his submissive in mind even as he may chastise or punish her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
It's quite incredible...

...that a story so brief can contain so much! A wonderful piece, a true tour de force - 5 *s without the least hesitation and more, please, Jennifer!

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Jennifer Green is the pen name of a published, married writer. These stories are fiction. "All writers share their fantasies. A writer's fetish is to be read." She also has a podcast called A Word with Joy at http://awordwithjoy.com.