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Click hereThe cop turned and palmed the camera to keep it from recording him or his prisoner and shoved Chase into the empty swat van then slammed the doors shut. The officer then turned and looked at the camera.
"I have no comment on any on going investigations." He said formally. "Thank you."
As the officers loaded their prisoners into the vans a woman walked through the gate. She a simple dress that hung loose down her body.
"My name is Mariah Jane and I would be happy to make a statement."
The reporters all turned and swarmed the woman like locusts. Even the officers turned to watch her with lifted curious brows.
"There is no truth to any of those allegations Miss. Ryan Jermaine Haley was a lunatic who happened to have been a member at one time."
"What about the reports that he was more then that?" The reporter demanded. "That he was your leader."
"That is false." Mariah answered with a smile. "Mr Haley was kicked out for his radical ideas. We have not before or since held to any of his beliefs. We are just a commune of people who want to live apart from the world. We preach the beauty of art. Painting to express the beauty and soul in all things.
These men and women have been seized by the government because they are scared of anything they cannot control. I have already called my lawyers and have complete faith my brothers and sisters will be released as soon as they are booked."
Mariah turned and strolled back through the massive wooden gate which swung closed behind her. The cameras all turned and swarmed the retreating swat vans. One of them got a shot through the window of Chase sitting against the side wall before the car pulled off.
- COMMENTS
Choices101over 7 years agoAuthorThank you Stalkme.
I do appreciate the love and support, all feedback is good. I didn't realize i was spelling Breathe wrong, so without that anon pointing it out it wouldn't have known it. So, i live and i learn.
Any and all Anon's are welcome to leave comments. I just hope people leave good feedback with the bad. even if you find a mispelling, there had to be something they like.
Thank you again, and keep on reading. You'll like what's to come!
stalkmeover 7 years agonvm those trolls above, i loved the first part of this series! Still really sad Jacob got killed, but super excited to see what this has in store, gramatical errors or not, who gives a hoot.
Anonymousover 7 years ago<b>Breath</b>. Chase whispered in his mind. <b>Breath</b> then speak. Calm yourself. <b>Breath</b> like she taught you.
The word you want is Breath<b>e</b>.
Anonymousover 7 years ago"insights into the demented mind of Serial Killers." - should read: "insights into the demented mindS of serial killers." You only capitalize proper names and titles. I mostly just skimmed the big info dump at the beginning, but I couldn't understand what this means: "his only memories of his recent like, were her."
"He was fanatic about it.": "he was fanaticAL about it." OR "he was A fanatic about it."
"For the next hour she rode him." An hour? They had actual intercourse non-stop for one hour? And then she jerks him for ten minutes after that?
Oh, I see. Everyone has intercourse for an hour straight. Are they suffering from priapism?
You have a lot of trouble with commas and periods. An editor would be helpful with that. You may tell a good story, but it's hard to get past all the errors and the hour-long sex.
