All Comments on 'A Step Too Far'

like see where you going with this.Please continue

Enjoyed the story...nice intro...please do more with them.

Well structured and well written. Good build-up. Great, if somewhat predictable climax. More please!

The ending was a little predictable but had a great build up into it and didn't take away from the story at all. Can't wait for more.

Yes the ending was a little predictable, but the characterization, attention to detail and teh action made for a very enjoyable read.

Not only a turn on, the story was truly enjoyable.

I'm enjoying looking over these earlier works of yours and can see how you were experimenting with various elements. Admittedly, I do enjoy the combination of lesbian incest combined with femdom, though I'm not one for cruel femdom. I bet if you were of a mind to, you could find a way for this scene to be a wonderful new series without the cruelty. That is how high I think of your skills as a writer. xoxoxo

Wonderful! Please continue it with prequels and sequels it was a pleasure to read!

This isn’t BDSM— it’s rape. One star.

Please more

Very good story.

So very hot. Part way through I suspected that the other woman was her daughter.