All Comments on 'A Stormy Night'

I like the style, the format. Well done!

That was very good. I also loved the form, and the pace was spot-on. I never usually enjoy a story written in 2nd person - unless it is actually written to me - but you did a brilliant job. You actually made me feel as if you were talking to me, and I was going through that experience. And, yes, it got me hot. VERY hot!

Please, write more.

Lou

xxx

I hated the writing style... found it very distracting.

I loved it! Could the "bad guy" turn into a series?

I usually don't like the form you used, but it definetely worked here. And, I like the idea someone else had of turning it into a series possibly. The story was great, and I really enjoyed it. My only complaint was the number of inches...there's more mystery and imagination if you say something about his 'huge monster of a cock' or something along those lines. Otherwise, it was great!

made ME wet!

Paragraphs are your friend!